Posted by: RBaral August 11, 2006
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BornInNewYork,
No doubt it is a nice piece of writing. But, it is note the ultimate.
There is room for editing.
For example, read this section:
Like the protagonist ........nowhere making him guess who could be his enemy
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It should have been: who could his enemy be...
By pointing this, I am not saying I can write better. He is an accomplished writer and a fine professor, I stand nowhere close. Namaste.