yo mug dude!....dunno wut to say yo bout ur story ..but have to give it to u...its kinda interestin'... reflects wut u r capable of while it comes bout writin...its good....keep the good work dude and let us hear mo'.......i will be checkin more of ur stories if u have any.....by the way do u urself know why that guy liked pink ping pong ball that much? roflmao!...if u do hit me up?...iight laterz ...pz..:)