Posted by: bhusan July 31, 2006
Ms PANDEY -- LAST PART
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Not meaning to take anything away from your writing talents, I found the final episode - anti climatic. The actual event from where most of the flashbacks occurred was not given the importance it deserved. I thought the flashbacks were building up for something more than a mere handing of the award. “So that pathway basically serves as a red carpet to the goddess?” I didn't find the statement so clever as to make that reference. “Exactly! Well said. I’m gonna use that as reference in the future. Can I steal it?” Makes me stipulate if the writer was in haste to finish the story off. How do you enjoy an expensive rug at the shrink's or even at your own place when you're being psycho analyzed? In his ingenuity at portraying small intricate details, the writer loses sight of the big picture, making one hungry for an alternative ending of sorts.
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