Bhaute is busy in something else ! LLCCMGMG Gautamjee is writing ek-se-ek sher. Nepe must be writing and correcting the same sher again and again so he is not posting. Birkhe needs to get acquinted with the rules of ghazal. http://www.cs.wisc.edu/~navin/india/songs/ghalib/ghazal.def.html Shirish'appreciates Nepe's comments and he is trying hard to "produce". He created many alternatives not knowing what to do. For e.g. शीत्तलमा स्वरुपको ब्याख्या फिक्का चर्को घामै माग्ने छाया जस्तो चाला Or मेरो रातमा उस्को रुप हरायो रे ! चर्को घाम माग्ने छाया जस्तो चाला Or रातले अस्तित्व बचाई दिंदा दिंदै चर्को घाम माग्ने छाया जस्तो चाला Please suggest.