Posted by: shirish July 24, 2006
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Birkhe, Gotame, Bhaute
Because of you (few) guys this thread is alive. Keep inspiring me. I would love to have some critical analysis so I would know where I am heading to.
Here is some thing I am working but could not proceed....
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बल्दा सम्म ताप्यो साथ रह्यो पनि
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