Sitara A subtle change in your genre; a good twist. It was an interesting read, but what's funny is that I was plotting a similar story where one brother returns his village after serving few years in armed force (still in service), to meet his mother and his brother; only to encounter his own brother as the red army. But I couldn't made it as eloquent and interesting as your piece. I liked the narration part also; the climax just takes off and keeps on throwing curves. A good story after a while in Sajha. Aru jawos.