Vantage Point - wah, wah wah .... you are on heck of a poet. I have no rebuttal or answer .... simply lajawab as they say! I have noticed your poetry in other places as well and think you are a gifted poet. Gurl_Interrupted, Plymouth - Thanks for reading and for your comments. Also, a quick correction, in Chapter 2, the sentence should read "...You are getting old and if you don't get married now you will never find a groom later" Apologies for the slip of the fingers :D