Ahh! The story seems one of a kind - a very precious thing that lovebirds tuck into their bleeding hearts and nurture it till they die- very humane indeed! Sajha Gazer, you write simple yet translucent prose. The theme has been astutely presented. 'KAASH'- TO YOU Manaa ke dono ke alag the raaste Phir kyun fidaa the wo ek doosre ke waaste Hawa ke sarsaraahat abhi bhi latein hai tumhari khusboo Kya ye naacheez doori hi thi jo wo karna sakey rubroo Aaj bhi mujhko uski aahat ka hai ahsaas Lagta hai usi ke liye hai mere man mandir goom soom aur udaas Dekh raha tha main uske do chalakte nain Rok na paya bas kho diya apna saara sukoon aur chain Kaash thaam liya hota uske najuk kalai Na banti wo tumse door aur parai Ab karen bhi to kya bas karke usko yaad Aage dekho to door nazar ayenge sunehre din aur raat Dekhlo nighen daal ke usi manzil pe miloge phir ek kamsin khaas. :) Aadaab