I didn't read all this long translation but I will at some point. However, I will mention something from Durga Kawach. Ya Devi Sarva Bhuteshu Nidra Rupena Sansthita Namastasyai Namastasyai Namastasyai Namo Namah. The goddess who represents all time - past, present and future has established everyone in sleep. That means everyone is dreaming keeping these two conscious eyes open. Somebody says, I will do this. Another one says, I will do that and so on, and they run all life to achieve that dream but for what. That was only a dream which is going to shatter. Therefore, the goddess, I salute you, salute you and salute you. Everyone who comes in Sajha is fully asleep.