Dude, yo kukur gyane dekhi ahile ta yati ris utheko chha ki yesle satta chhodera khurukka gayo bhane pani chitta bujdaina malai ta , yo muji chor janta mara lai ta russia ko czar lai jasto gari goli thoki thoki tadpai tadpai marnu parchha. Mathi ko point harule ta ajai pani yo chor chahi pramukha kheladi ho bhanne bhan hunchha , aba yesle diyeko chahinna hamilai hami afaile jiteko purna prajatantra chahinchha. nevertheless, nicely composed , if you have time dude, please rephrase it in a way that PYARA NEPALI JANATA WILL FEEL LIKE THEY FOUGHT FOR DEMOCRASY RATHER THAN THINK THAT GYANENDRE GAVE IT ( as if he was sent by god to do all this ) ,