Posted by: shirish March 26, 2006
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Birkhe
If you change the structure of the sentences, they basically become poems.
There are many instances as such. Here is one that you have quoted.
बाहिर पानी रोकियो,
भित्र बर्सिरहेछ।
तिमी बर्सिरहेछौ,
म रूझिरहेकी छु।
फरक यत्ति हो -
बर्सिने बादललाई थाहा छैन,
ऊ धरतीको कुन शुष्क कुनालाई
छप्छप्ती रूझाइरहेछ।"