Surendra jee, I think you have been preety straight forward with what you wanted to say which is good and makes clear expression. But it will be more interesting to read what nepe says "layered" expressions which can convey different meanings. Plus although the shers are individual in a ghazal, the sher in your matla stands aloof from rest of the political shers. Thats my understanding hai ! Here is mine after a break. Seems the ideas are running out. तृप्त भैसकेको तृष्णा केहि क्षणमै जाग्यो ! ईच्छाले कमजोर मनको किनारा नाघ्यो ! मागें देबीसित कि जोड्न सकुं टुक्राहरु रिझिन आफै कलीलो बलीको घांटी ताक्यो ! छरपष्ट छायाहरु छिटो छिटो छोट्टिदैछन् पाईलाले टेकेका बालुबा बाढीले सा-यो ! पर्दाले कति बेरै थुन्ला कोठाको उज्यालो ? राति नै घाम आउने ठाउं कुहीरोले छान्यो !