Khaobaadi, yes, though I have tried to paint a shade of optimsim in the second stanza, the song overall sounds quite pessimistic. About the song being crappy, I note the point. However, it would have helped me to improve this song if it was a constructive criticism instead of just acritism. And Chhiring, you are kind arent you? Thanks for listening to it. Constructive critisms would be gladly accepted. I am going to change the guitar solo in this song for sure sometime later. - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073 Pls provide your feedback