Firstly I would like to thank everyone for reading the story. I was surprised to see so many replies. And my special humble and heartfelt thanks to Indi and Nirman for understanding how "emotional and teary" I am (and also for telling the rest of the world about my oh-so-emotional nature)!! ;) And maybe I will finish the dewar bhauju story some other day... actually i got bored with it but lemme think of what happens next. Whateva.. about the legal thing in marrying two people... well they had a court marriage and no one really knew.. plus someone has to file a case against him for some legal action to take place. And yes my character was a bit weak.. was trying to potray how naive people can be and how they can change after something drastic. Of course gwajo really defended me on that ;).. nice explanations. Thanks . Khaobadi, well it was ten years ago but something like marrying you and then going off with someone else cant really be forgotten. Especially when you risk it all to be with someone .. and also when you end up some place where you had never intended to be, illegal and working in a pub. But maybe it was a little dramatic. The ending was cut a bit short.. I intended to make it a bit longer.. Anyway really appreciate your reading the story and commenting on it :)