Thank you all. Freek, I understand what you are saying when you say death could have been shown in slow motion. But in the song, I was trying to portray the agression, which is not lacking in either the armies or rebels. Besides, when we hear in "breaking news" that fight is still going on in some remote areas and reports are awaited, the picture that plays in our mind is of chaos and bursts of energy, and that is what I have tried to portray. I am writing other songs with lyrics to portray the situation of Nepal. Nepali nari, thanks for your input. Points noted. Lyrics being written for other songs. As my aim is to create awareness of civil war in Nepal, the lyrics will be in English. And I will be banking on words of mouth to reach to wider audience. Nas, there are pretty cool songs in your site. Your music was neat without much noise. How do you record your songs? for the rest of Sajhaites, can anyone tell me a little more about Mahisasur the demon so that I can write what he actually was. For the time being , I have just written that he was a notorius demon. - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073 cheers