Posted by: shirish January 1, 2006
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Thank You Nepe. That was just my experimentation and I had that in a different format. I will post it later on. Some of the things you said were in my mind. Satte!
Here is one I am working on. I will add some more shers on this. Please comment as I am having some conflict on some shers.
मारिनेको बन्द बक्सामा नया बिधान थियो !
चर्केको बर्तमान र समस्याको निदान थियो !
एकै ठाउँमा अध्यारा रातहरु थुप्रै भेटिए
दिनले अस्वीकारेको उज्यालोको चिहान थियो !
बाचा भने मखमली न्यानो, सिरानी काखको
ऊपहारमा, ओढ्ने आकाश र ढुङ्गे मचान थियो !
कोही स्वतन्त्र छैनन् कि राम्रो हाल सुनाउन ?
बेहाल सुनाउछु भन्नेहरुको बथान थियो !