Here's my third poem in " DIRGE AND RISE " series.....I would love to find some comments and critiques Never felt so cold before Never found myself so lost The furthur I tried to fly the closer you came to clip my wings forgive me..let me fly with these weak wings let me live with my loneliness the trust shared... was shattered a long time ago what's the point in believing again I've been morbid for a long time don't come to lift my spirits now the soul is weak,the flesh is sore somewhere in the horizon...I look for light even though I know, it's already been darkened let me live in the tumultous past don't show me the dreams of tommorrow time and again, I know I won't survive I'll be better dead,don't try to make me alive ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- GurL_Interrupted , waiting for your critique n comments.