Had me in giggles... pretty typical scene, well written work. Golly gosh... this Lahure guy.. he writes miles and miles and shows no sign of stopping. Does he do it at lunch time or doesn't he get any work done at all ? Or is he one fast thinker and an even faster typer.*pheww* And hardly any grammatical or spelling error. How ndoes he manage? How about a sequel huh? Like, you could go really sci-fi.. suppose the woman was actually some other being from planet xpiladocious??! Kidding!