Sitara is this a paper or something? I wasn't able to read more than the first part which I must say from you is horrible. I am sorry I have read some of your things in the past and this one is by far... the worst (well I haven't read anything recently... ummm the one I like was the some night out with girlfriends or something u wrote). I didn't read the whole thing but from what I gather you are probably trying to write from a kid who is autistic (spare me if I am wrong... in my ignorance I might have got that wrong) ... I bet you know more and all but seriously nothing grabbed me at all whatsoever from the first big paragraph. Well I would love to give a long constructive critism and all but I wish I had the time. And oh, if this IS a paper... As I exhaut"ed" my lungs I believe (First para 6th or something line). I would hate to see a C- because of a stupid grammatical error!