Posted by: shirish August 8, 2005
ASAD - shirish writes A Sher A Day
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?        
स्थापित पत्रिकामा गजल प्रकाशित हुनु ठुलो कुरो होईन । Bhaute, Houston Thank You. I think you need some kind of push with the publication. Feed backs are important to know which direction one is heading to. राम्रो गजल लेख्नु ठुलो कुरो हो। You are certainly right Houston. I am preety much new to this field and as you can see I miss points occasionally but I will keep trying despite writing FAZAL from time to time. You guys have been of great help by making positive and constructive comments. राम्रो लेख्नु kalli man hunaa ra hoina? rahyo kura grey matter ko capability ma. Here is one with Matla and maqta only... हालत नाजुक हुंदा, भेटिन उपकारी एउटा ! घाँटी थिची मुक्ति दिन, अघि सर्छ आभारी एउटा ! khali tahu vara! ----------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------ शिरिष हैरान भो, साथीहरुका अबतार हेर्दा कता पो मिल्ने ? बिद्रोही एउटा, अधिकारी एउटा !
Read Full Discussion Thread for this article