Suraj ji, Loved your multimedia presentation, although scrolling was too fast to read the poem in one go. Beautiful poetry indeed. However, to my बुढो आँखा, they sound like oft-repeated महिमा of love. How about trying a new approach, a new and offbeat look at love ? You wrote: प्रेम बुझ्नेलाई श्रीखण्ड र नबुझ्नेलाई खुर्पाको बिंड हो । Make that प्रेम बुझ्नेलाई खुर्पाको बिंड हो, श्रीखण्ड त नबुझ्नेलाई मात्र हो । And extend that. Just an idea. Nepe