i can appreciate ur views but i have some dissenting views over there.................. poem can be written from two perspectives 1. so that u get satisfaction.i mean to satisfy urself 2. so that others can read ur creation and feel ur felings.they may like it or not .but their comments and aspiration will help u to write a next better piece.There is third reason also to write poem 3. to be self accalaimed poet............(damn it! this is the worst motive to write a poem) In fact, u should be poets in others eyes not in urs.I am not a poet just a author of my feelings regardless of others like it or not................you have not been poet for ten minutes nor i think u are....ur poem, i could not read nicely coz of roman nepali but still i think it conveyed some meaning.................... if u want to write just for the sake of writing, leave it...but be patient and keep on writing .one day, people feel that there is something in you............ Did u like my views?