I read people's comments................it's ok for me but i knew that here are some people who think themselves as a master and as a learned poets but they talk like "pani ma padne jasto kuro"...............if anybody thinks that he is good and competent enough in that subject, i really challenge him/her/them/ to write over here so that everybody can read and send comments..................kabita ghar ma rakhera kabi bhako ding hanne haru murdabad.lau ja maile bhandiye................Thanks for comments to nepe, dada, and sirish.if anybody has illusion like this is national poem or something like that, please wake up man.u can criticize, of course, but u think that u are too good on the subjects , then, why u do not show ur ability? Gazal ka digaaz haru.it is my attempt and there may be various mistakes....tell, particularly where is the mistake , if u have balls...ballsless people please do not talk , jus passing comments like "panima padeko " or something like that..............i hope the links provided out here is really good................ who do not consider Ashesh Malla, Balawara, and sarubhakta as poets, damn ur knowledge about nepali Literature.u like it or do not like, my attempts will go on Guys take care and u are at liberty to write some inspirin and critical comments Let's see Who has that ability?