Arch 119, thank u for ur comments......I am laughing here after reading ur comments because u wrote very simple and meangful comments.i know u are expecting something about her(supposedly my girlfriend) but that was my inability and if i tried, poem would be very long...............so, i could not explain where and how did she vanish from my life but still i hope that u liked in the sense that i was able to express my feelings when she was and was not with me..................I will try in my later poems to expalin (not this situation) but other so that u will find all the things taht u think should be in a poem............. So, far as rythm is there, I already said that This si gazal and will have little sutra(formula) .So, it is bound by that formula.............otherwise, it will not be gazal any more.I will publish my next poem soon,.............I hope You people will find much deapth in coming poem.. Houston, if u have ability to comment where i have done mistakes, you are at liberty to suggest me but do not pass blank comments and judgements please.............I do not know how many poets in this world have become poets after reading a llong history of poems and literature.............I did not get any Balawara's poems right now but i will publish his poem here as soon as I get it