Very well written, the nice part was as that the plot went throught smoothly and you telling the bannana being thrown out the window was like injection food flavor in a beef, before being roasted. That memory of bannana came out to be a suprized twist in the plot. The other thing is you did not have to mention the bannana being thrown out the window again to remind the reader abt what happened earlier. In then end feel sorry for the brother coz all his life he raised his sister with all his hard work, and now at the end he is gonna live, the rest of his life with a guilt staggered in this heart like a dagger. Do you think he will be able to tell his sis that it was him and how whould she react. man thats painful to even think about. I would not go into the sheakesphere debate anymore i know about it all along abt the fued, in my english class i submitted a paper abt shakesphere not being fake, found out that the professor was a big beliver of shakesphere being a fake writer. It cost me in my grade, man i still think why did i choose that topic.