Indisguise, Thanks you for taking a look at my short piece. But I did expect a little critique from a talented man like you; I am upset for that did not happen. :) Hush! This poem is not about sex; it is about desire of a human heart. Baccha ko hallai dherai! :) SITARA, For the ?unrequited passion? ? Someday, I hope . Till then, if you are ready for some favorable deeds, let me know! On a serious note, this was written focusing desire of a human heart. Desires are complex feature of living animals. How far can animals go without fulfilled desires, it is what I am trying to discover. Thax for peeking in everybody!