Posted by: perplexed July 1, 2005
Fourth Of July - Story.
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Thax meera for coming in and enjoying the story. I happen to notice simple gramatical errors as I was reading it the second time, so I hope you edited as you read thru. I also had a thought of this one page story to be of several pages, but as I came to the point where Amit raises his last question, I really could not write more. Humaness in him drowned his moral values. His returning to raped and beaten Nepal was not possible. Comfort, pleasure and security he had here was not guaranteed there. That is the reason I stopped the story right there raising a question, "What in the earth is there to go back for, the damn lofty brown soil ? " Thax again aba msn ma bhetula :P
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