Indi jyu... your words are so beautiful, that I can feel my heart melt.. I seriously can feel it... when I was going through your words I could SEE her sitting there and you laying beside her and admiring her beauty. The way you have defined her beauty and your situation is wonderful. I am falling short of words, I dont know how to tell you how beutiful I think your work is. The way you describe it.. your words.. they go straight to the heart and remain there. You are the few people who are gifted with words...and I hope you keep writing and make readers like me lucky with your words, your thoughts and your heart-felt experience... was just GREAT.. your description of falling in love and being captivated by her beauty is so enthralling... i mean what can I say? its just awesome... I applaud you with all my heart.. and hope to hear more:) My favorite lines.. "Something had changed within me, and I could not fight it. I always knew the power of persuasion women had, known what a smile could do, and the power that their beauty yields. Heck, I even knew that those beautiful hairs could engulf us in to darkness, but I never knew until then, that innocence laced pearly tears, like beautiful morning dew which at times, condensed from nowhere, in those eyes, that the ever trying eyelids failed to hide would be so powerful, and even defeat a Herculean effort to seal my heart. As those water drops trickled down from those reservoirs and ran unceremoniously thru those smooth cheeks of hers, I surrendered."