Saru bro, jhola bokne bela ma chai dadako mann kudai kudai hatta patta aghi sarni, aile chai tarkana khojni? Khurukka jastako tastai bhanam aba dudh ko dudh paani ko paani. Dada yatra ma ja ja tapailai sanka lagchha tya tya khali thau rakhnus khurukka saru le bharnu parchha tya k k huna gayo bhanera. :) Good going dada. This will be a fine piece of literature once you finish it off and refine. Take time but put your best effort for sanju kabya.