Posted by: hancyguy April 3, 2005
Photo Kabita
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?        
usofa, your single stanza poem is really nice that summarizes the pain of betryal and faint hope at once. But let me remind you that the words you are using in your poem is more stronger than the picture. Let's put this way: the picture says that the memory of the past is graudally fading, but your expression says no. This is good combination, in my view, that makes clear distinction between head and heart. Your memory can go dim gradually and may not be able to recall the protrait of a dear one properly, but ask your heart how close were you and are you with that betryal love. well done guys, keep it up.
Read Full Discussion Thread for this article