Wow newuser ....dammi chha ne ta story ta...casting nai kya khatara....pani pareko....jungle ma ....dui jana....kya romantic....tara DAAAAAAAR lagena bhanya...he he he OK i am analysing some of ur sentences ..... We both cling to each other tenaciously so that the ghastly wind would not rip us apart>>>>>>>>> yo pani pariraheko...huri chaliraheko belama khali yehi scenary repated huncha jahile pani....kina hola??....he he he...but great description of urs though.... A place of solitude, where only two souls with a single faith called love could meet and do what they wanted. But ours was an unblemished love that grew with our growth, so there was no question of any lust and desires rushing over our vein>>>>>>>>> ....hummm GREAT....ek dam choko maya pirati rahecha....TRUE LOVE... We were afraid to be spotted by some one who knew us>>>>>>....yo choko maya ma pani kina darr ko X-factor???...pyar kiya hai koi chori to nahi kiya....he he he Then she stood up, knelt on my side and kissed on my forehead.........A sweet, delicious taste of her lips vibrated with mine, and I felt strange>>>>>>....how sweet.....he he he... Now newuser ....waiting for next part to analyse it.... keep posting.........