3.YOu did not include the disagreements among the third world countries with the UN declaration and their own regional agreements that follow more holistic appraoch than the individualistic appraoch of the UN declaratuion and also puts a high emphasis on subsistence rights. Read this as: 3.You did not include the disagreements among the third world countries with the UN declaration and their own regional agreements [Banjul declaration being the m,ost famous one] that follow more holistic appraoch than the individualistic appraoch of the UN declaratuion, and also put a VERY high emphasis on subsistence rights than political rights.