cool keta, i don't mean to say anything against you, but the rap line you used, it seemed to me like its someone else's line. sounds very familiar, but i can't remember from who. If it is yours, then that is really good, but the theme relates more toward eminem. im not saying the line is from eminem but it relates. and the RAP part is really good. and the whole song is good too. i like it. good job, and keep it up bro!