Nooo no.. girly..its not vulgar.... all he wanted to write was---------> C) Virginity. But this should not be a biggie... afta all a guy also looses his :). On the serious note, It would be mah pleasure to help u out ( in whatever capacity.. but lemme just tell u one thing.. one can not be a GOOD poet, one either is or ain't)... What i meant by this is, when it comes from heart.. it almost alwys is a god poem :p... as long as one has heart, and i am sure u do.. u should do fine.:).. of course working on it would help u out with how u form and present ur stanzas. Darn... lamo lecture bhayo.. IndisGuise:)