Posted by: shirish January 17, 2005
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Dadagiri,
Gazhal don't need "Shirshak", but I have seen lots with titles. I don't think it will harm though.
BTW I have tried to transform the poem by Surendra into gazal format without altering his core feeling. I know rewriting that can make it even more expressive.
Check the beher (the meter), kafia and radif.
I don't know why I did that. maf paun!