Posted by: shirish January 17, 2005
YO EK GAJAL-<>
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Nepe guru, You have inflamed me in the past for not being with the rules of gazal. त्यसो त अपरम्परागत तर गजल सदृश रचनाहरुलाई स्वतन्त्र गजल (free style ghazal) को रुपमा सम्मान गर्नुपर्छ भन्ने मेरो व्यक्तिहत मान्यता छ । can you please illustrate me some e.g. with the free style ghazals so that I wont have to go through that painful and time consuming behers? You are the ones who advocates that all the ghazals should be singable and those which cant be singable will not be heard. Dadagiri, 1.Chhanda milayera lekhena bhane KAVITA nai bhanna mildaina bhanya jasto kura nagarum... "Paudi khelna sakne bhayepachhi matra paudi khel!" I understand what you mean. If you are writing a KAVITA, then simply call it a kavita...I mean, dont catagorize dont call it JPT lekheko lai Jhayahure chanda ma lekheko, ya anuprayas chanda ma lekheko... Why would some one complicate things by catagorizing or classiying WRONGLY? When you are learning to swim, if some one correctly instructs you how to swim, whont your learning curve be more sharp? RUINA "thaha nai bhayeena maile tyati bhanda hajur maathi yati dherai kura aiparcha bhanee .." I was as ignorant as you or surendras about the rules of ghazal and after being grilled by Nepe, I am beginning to understand, yet not fully. I beleive, the learning process never ends. Actually what you said what a good point so that Paradesh.com's attention could be drawn for the correctly catagorizing. Afu ta jhan sojo manle niyam milena bhanya ta manche haru le barbad paryo... BTW here is the definition of ghazal Poetic form that originated in the Middle East and is composed of a series of independent couplets called shers that have a common meter and rhyme scheme. The rhyme scheme is aa, ba, ca, da and the last word is of the second line is usually repeated to make the rhyme. www.cranberrydesigns.com/poetry/glossary.htm Galti bho hazur.....hazur haru le bhaneko kura chahi barai ana sahi ! FERI malile ta sapai kura naramro china pani ta bhanya thiyena..khani meter, beher matra way off cha bhanya ho. After hearing all this, I have to admit, Surendars ji ko GHAZAL ekdamai khatara cha...! For I can't argue anymore. Niyem siyem bhandma jawos. Bida paun...
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