Tyo andra bhudi nikalera heryo bhane ta Shakespeare ko writing ma pani katti fault cha katti. Anatomy and constructive criticism has always been helpful, but i believe even for them to be justifiable, it has to be reasonable. Aba tyaso bhaye constructive criticism ko pani counter constructive criticism dinu parne huncha :) Malai ta sarai ramro lagyo baaaa... and i actually liked the fact that the writer has left for us to imagine,create and feel the relationship betn Rachael and Rakesh aka Rocky. Ma pani kunai din tasamla mero rachana:)... khali lekhna baki.. ani tasamla:) Deep guru malai sakti deuuuuuuuuuuu, IndisGUise:) P.S: Tyo dada giri bro ko ghoda ko masu napakeko le chepati lagera hairaan cha :).. polna pugena ki?