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 " My Day " - Nepali short documentary film ( feedback please)

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Posted on 03-04-11 12:28 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 03-04-11 9:14 AM     [Snapshot: 107]     Reply [Subscribe]
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thank you bro. yeah its all about details and i will definately work on that in my next film.



 
Posted on 03-04-11 9:32 AM     [Snapshot: 118]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice video! Enjoyed your video editing skills as well as the story of your day!

Thanks for sharing

 
Posted on 03-04-11 9:42 AM     [Snapshot: 132]     Reply [Subscribe]
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i appreciate for the comment. yeah we all share similiar story... i try to potray his story through camera. thanks again

 
Posted on 03-04-11 7:49 PM     [Snapshot: 283]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Well done guru. ek dam daami chha. keep it up. really enjoyed your story...your videography and editing talent...badhai chha...

 
Posted on 03-05-11 10:52 PM     [Snapshot: 473]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thanks guru! I m working on my next one! Wish me luck
 
Posted on 03-09-11 10:38 AM     [Snapshot: 609]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 03-09-11 10:10 PM     [Snapshot: 751]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 simple and intresting.....
 
Posted on 03-09-11 11:31 PM     [Snapshot: 788]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Really loved it, I liked your editing, music and theme....bro which camera did you use? and what software to edit?? Im very interested. Thanks again and waiting for your second one....

 
Posted on 03-10-11 8:59 AM     [Snapshot: 873]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Loved it man...looking forward for your next video....there are lot of stories in NY...hope you will get on it...overall great work...loved the time lapse editing music and everything
 
Posted on 03-10-11 9:15 AM     [Snapshot: 880]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Good visual, edits. Did you goto school for this?
 
Posted on 03-10-11 12:55 PM     [Snapshot: 913]     Reply [Subscribe]
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thanks everyone for the comments...
@terebaje : i shot interview with canon 500d with l-series lens 24-105mm and for all other shots i used iphone 4, even to record sound.........
@looser: yeah you are absolutely right. there are bunch of stories in new york. im working on my next short film...
@stiffer: no i didnt school on this. i m in different field. its my intrest. what ever im doing its all selfeducation.


 
Posted on 03-10-11 7:51 PM     [Snapshot: 996]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Wow! You've got it in you and you beautifully portrayed a huge part of a person's life and personality in a 10 min video . My thoughts after seeing this...

I thoroughly enjoyed how you brought out a story behind a plate of sushi. A lot of us go out to eat and most of the time we are engrossed on our own problems and many a times I have complained about how dry or pasty the wasabi came out to be. But you brought a story behind that, behind a man who cuts the fish and garnishes the sushi platter. A man who was taken aback by the concept of eating raw fish and sounds as if he doesn't even eat sushi but he prepares it for us. Day in and day out. That's a very humbling thought.

You also show the monotony that has taken over Kancha's life. While he admits Loshar is really the only time when he gets to have fun, it's poignant to see how time has flown by. Coming to a new country and experiencing new things, he's settled down to dare I say 'the comfort of everyday life.' In fact he looks forward to retiring in Nepal for a change. We are all guilty of this, whether your job is to work at a store or make sushi or write computer programs, we become comfortable with our safety net. Nothing wrong with it but that's how it is.

Lastly, your editing and sound were both great and suited the story.

Great work once again!

FF

 
Posted on 03-10-11 8:37 PM     [Snapshot: 1018]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I liked your video and have few suggestions for you not necessarily professional, just from viewer's point. I don't think the scene of lake makes any connection with your story and also you have few scenes focusing on body parts of Kanchha in earlier part of the movie which I think are not necessary. I like your your video capturing and editing skills but as someone wrote you need better story. Instead of daily routine of Kanchha I would like to see story of his struggle and success, something interesting...

Hopefully, we will get more and better videos from you.
All the best.
   

 
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@fortunefaded: i really appreciate for your feedbacks... thats was really really nice.. i m working on my next one... please watch it and feedback... thanks again

@Geology Tiger: thank you for your suggestion. to be honest, i had no intention of puttting that leg scene in there, infact lot of my friends brag me about that. my intention was to put feet scene there, i didnt notice that sorry of that. lesson learned. :D  about that timelapse of river, i was trying to show how fast time flys by. right after that he says life in newyork is really busy.  i am working on my next short film, please leave me a feedback

 
Posted on 03-12-11 3:46 PM     [Snapshot: 1151]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 I really got lost in the minutia you portrayed! You definitely have a vision, you just gotta refine it! I think what you showed us required an intense research..and really I'm amazed! Wonderful camera works, editing, and background sound (Philip Glass??)!

I see room for improvement in ability to use natural light (overall it was good job)..I would like to see more videos from you in totally different topic....

Good luck!
 
Posted on 03-15-11 12:25 PM     [Snapshot: 1306]     Reply [Subscribe]
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@tuttle: thanks for the comments... i am working on my next and its gonna be short film. still looking for actor haha

 
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 Liked it !!!
 
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really liked your video/story.. you portrayed the simple and busy life/schedule for almost all the people here in US .. Great Job.. I hope to see more from you in the future..

walkahead

 
Posted on 03-19-11 12:13 PM     [Snapshot: 1540]     Reply [Subscribe]
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sure you will...i got busy schdule too bro...but still i m working on my next one....coming soon
THANKS for feedback

 



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