I liked your video and have few suggestions for you not necessarily professional, just from viewer's point. I don't think the scene of lake makes any connection with your story and also you have few scenes focusing on body parts of Kanchha in earlier part of the movie which I think are not necessary. I like your your video capturing and editing skills but as someone wrote you need better story. Instead of daily routine of Kanchha I would like to see story of his struggle and success, something interesting...

Hopefully, we will get more and better videos from you.
All the best.