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 GUYS I WANN SHARE MY POEMS WITH U, PLZ GIVE ME SOME COMMENTS
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Posted on 03-12-06 8:13 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Dear Friends,

Here is my poem, plz read and comments it ok


To die for love.

Love cannot be shown,
through the world so sinned.
Love cannot be seen,
through the light so dimmed.

But as we placed our hands,
palm to palm.
I felt the immediate fire.
Sharing my heart with you,
with all loves desire.

Shall I be so lucky,
to die for the love with you?
Shall I be so lucky.
to have eternal love so true?

You are my dream,
my fantasy and my love.
I fear not death,
as I see the heavens above.

Oh how I'll wait for that bright day,
when all love will be revealed.
Oh how my heart warms,
as with our very last kiss,
our lives will be sealed.

You're heart matches mine,
connects like a jigsaw.
You are my belonged one,
who ill love forever more.

I stand tall,
for our love shall not be torn apart.
As our tragedy of love,
will only be the start.

The innocent blood,
will rest upon our hands.
The innocent blood,
will symbolize our true love,
as we enter our own land.
 
Posted on 03-12-06 10:10 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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राम्रो छ हजुर, अरु पनी लेख्दै गर्नुहोस
 
Posted on 03-13-06 8:21 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice! but doesn't it kind of seem to go into a different subject around about at the end?? hmm.. maybe not i am not sure what do you think Nepali Soul? :) :)
 
Posted on 03-13-06 10:48 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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last para is totally out of the whole thing...u might wanna make a connection with the rest....n jigsaw??hmmmm idk!!
 


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