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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:10
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why i am so lonely? when i cant feel u near me.. may be its bcuz of this thing that keeps me believing but what can it be? this thing that makes me go crazy it makes me feel bad that i really breath so hard it really makes me blue especially when he is with u i know i dont have the right to get him out of your sight but plzzz receive this thing i'm offering and hope its this you'll be giving its 'love' what i m saying........
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sense
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:21
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nice ...:)is that what every gurl feels????:S
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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:36
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well , may be???????? there is a big possibility hehe...
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wateva
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:38
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THAT made like jack shit sense.
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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:38
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well may be.. there is a huge posibility hehe....
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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:39
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well well well thats not nice thing to say @ wateva... justo name ushtai manchey...
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wateva
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:44
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sense
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Posted on 01-18-05 6:52
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wateva I am just appreciating what I cant, if u can do better than that ..wao..I mean wao. Gurly has a serious crush I believe...hey put into axns hai otherwise u know how guys r ..they dont remain long like that.
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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-18-05 7:00
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if i write that kinda poems it doesnt mean that it relates to my personal life..... hehe u guys must know that poets have an extra power to imagine things...:P:P
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sense
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Posted on 01-18-05 7:10
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that was what I believed ..helaas it proved to be wrong. U surely have a talent ...post some more will ya??? ..... PLSSSS
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Nirman
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Posted on 01-18-05 9:44
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hey gurly, do writer write what they imagine only or something that is in their inner self...i mean what is in their sub concious mind...don't u think they also write about their daily life..maybe not what is happening to them but what they see and feel..anyways good work keep going..
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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-19-05 8:14
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ofcourse sense i will post more :).... ani yea nirman dont u think it wud be kinda boring if i start writing bout my daily life.... well anyways thankx guys for ur support i really appreciate it... thnkx a lot
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Nirman
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Posted on 01-19-05 9:52
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hoina borin ra non borin ko kura hoina..its all about writing...if u write on ..maybe some would find it borin but at same time there would be someone who will find it interesting...for me i would love to read anything thats written...course book baaheek hai..so i hope u ll write more and post more....Keep writing thats what really matters..
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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-20-05 3:02
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why? why is it dark? when I feel you apart why don't the stars shine? when I feel that you're not mine why is the breeze so cold? when I don't have you to hold why does it rain? when I feel in pain why aren't you here? when I need you near tonight I wish for the stars to shine so I know you are mine. Please don't ever go away.
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 01-20-05 8:13
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"tonight I wish for the stars to shine so I know you are mine." ---------------------------- I think if u had ended it here, it would be more powerful. This stanza is beautifully composed and has a subtle yet obvious meaning. The last line makes it WAYYYY too obvious and makes a poem looks like a desperate (loud). Just my two cents. Keep writing. I kindda stopped long tyam back :( Indisguise:(
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 01-20-05 8:14
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makes a poem looks like a desperate (loud) Read : makes it look desperate (loud).
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NIVAN
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Posted on 01-20-05 9:00
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Posted on 01-20-05 9:03
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girly_gurl
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Posted on 01-20-05 6:59
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thankx nivan , red stone and indisguise...... hey indisguise why did u stop writing dude????? well its not late to start it over isnt it????..... well i m not a gud poet so u can help me :P ..... common i really wanna c ur poems next time if u can then plzzzzzzzz...
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Posted on 01-20-05 7:35
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are you in love girly_gurl ? my advice to you; don't ever fall in love at this age otherwise you will end up losing your ................(fill in the blanks) A) money B) freedom C)........ and correct answer is C
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