I am in the crowd where people pretend not to see me.
Like a forgotten celebrity I fade in the background.
I am in the crowd where people gaze at me with pity.
Like a clown I stand there while they laugh at my posture.
I am in the crowd where people start whispering.
Like a fool I sit on my wheelchair looking.

I am sorry I make you feel uncomfortable,
Honestly thatýs not my intention.
I am sorry I want to play just like any other,
I am only looking for acceptation.
I am sorry people stare because of me,
If only my mother had done abortion.

Not only am I trapped in my personal hell,
But also this life for me is worse than cell.
Everyday even for simple task I suffer so much,
Donýt know how much longer on this life I can clutch.
Not that I expect anyone to understand
As my own brother pushes me away.

Yes, I am different than any of you
And I may need special ed.
I may not be ýcoolý, I may not be a ýhottieý
But am I not human with feelings?
My pain only I can comprehend
My only request can you stop calling me a ýretardý?

wowwwwwww nescient......just fantabulous :) hats off to u!!!:)

nescient
monika ta hats matrai...
ma chai tauko....khutta jay pani..(except heart..cos it doesnt belong to me..;o)..) kartey ra timro khutta ma hai :o)...

and thanks for writing about me ;o)...and atually u got it wrong kay..i said me request was to carry on calling me retard ...:oS...kya tension now cos u mis wrote that most crucial part..:oS..well correct it hai..;o)...

cheers..:o)

my eyes are wet.

greaat!!!

loved it..

esp. this stanza..i can relate it to myself :)

"Not only am I trapped in my personal hell,
But also this life for me is worse than cell.
Everyday even for simple task I suffer so much,
Donýt know how much longer on this life I can clutch.
Not that I expect anyone to understand
As my own brother pushes me away."

Nescient (spl???) aka MPF (miss poem factory), I swear I don't have your number!!! :D:D
But after reading this poem, I'd love to have ur number!!! :D:D (KIDDDIN' Attinu pardaina)... :P Awesome poem hau... seems like you are givin' our aasu kavi run for his money!! :D Taaliyaaa!!! Wah Wah!!! Masaalla :D

Thank you all.I always get great encouragement from you all.

Dananah: My apologies for missing the most curcial part :)

Bravo! .....Encore!!!

*thumbs up*

Foxy Lady manages to post everywhere BRAVO!!
(can i say *i** down?)

ehhehe nescient: kasto ramro poem

Great piece..

I thought of something else...
:)

Im not bein sheep or anything..but really....
....very touching poem..sad but touching..put me in a thinking mood...reflecting mood..

Cheers Nescient sis..do continue posting more poems...

Domi

and LIAR always seems to follow up on meh...good boy....now sit..SIT ...good doggie *pats on de head*

That was overpoweringly depicted....Another feather added to ur hat...Hats off! Nescient..simply fab!....


Ashley!

Foxy Lady now don't start over here too.Just cause I called you a street dog and b**ch now you calling me a dog.Atleast come up with something original.

Look whoz talking.......good boy...now Sit again.

Ok now you can talk/bark/holler .........

It's never good to touch crap and oppss I touch it (Foxy Lady)!!Now it's gonna stink for a long time.

Like I said in the other thread Foxy Lady,you may have the last word.

*touched it

For a second, I thought I you wanted me to cancel my verizon's IN- Network plan.


:)