The daughter asked this question on the first part

हाम्रै अनुराधा अन्टी त होइन अन्कल् ले भन्न खोजेको?
It seems she knows well abt Anuradha. But in the last part you told...

अहिले अनुराधा करोड पति ब्यापारीको श्रीमती भएर घर र ब्यबसाय दुबै सम्हाल्दै छिन् होली।

It seems you dun know much abt her family and business occupation now but how could your daughter knew abt Anuradha aunty .

In the first part it used to look like you ppl were in good family reln till now but last part ma tyo annyol.....uncertain kura bhayeko jastai lagyo malai. It's my view only.

But RahulVai you have written a good story. You made it flow well and i loved reading it. I request you to write more. Thanks for sharing your words with us.

P.S 'You' is referred the actor of the story.