Posted by: shirish May 4, 2007
A Sher A Day: Part II: Ghazal talk
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I would like to thank all those who have been sending me private messages. They really encourage me. Nepe guru thinks editings - reeditings are musts. But with this I have reached to a point of saturation. I would really appreciate if you can point out the negatives and weaknesses than just pick up the shers you like. Ready.... भट्टामा थुनीएको महसुस हुन थाल्यो ! कोईलाको साटो मन पो भुस हुन थाल्यो ! भन्दै थिए घारमा जे थिए मह थिएन मैनको स्वाद थाहा नहुदा तुस हुन थाल्यो ! यथार्थ नबुझी कृत्रीम मूस्कान देख्दा नि मूर्ख छिमेकी उकुस-मुकुस हुन थाल्यो ॥ झन् बास बस्न घर आंगन छोडि दिएं, सांझ आएका पाहूना, जाशुस हुन थाल्यो । मैले आस्था बेची दिदा खुबै नाफा हुने भो ! आफ्ना मान्छेहरु बिच, खुस्खुस हुन थाल्यो । कुनै नेतासित नाता गांस्न गएकै हैन ! जन्ती त्यसै उत्तेजित, जुलुस हुन थाल्यो ।
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