Posted by: shirish May 4, 2007
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I would like to thank all those who have been sending me private messages. They really encourage me.
Nepe guru thinks editings - reeditings are musts. But with this I have reached to a point of saturation.
I would really appreciate if you can point out the negatives and weaknesses than just pick up the shers you like.
Ready....
भट्टामा थुनीएको महसुस हुन थाल्यो !
कोईलाको साटो मन पो भुस हुन थाल्यो !
भन्दै थिए घारमा जे थिए मह थिएन
मैनको स्वाद थाहा नहुदा तुस हुन थाल्यो !
यथार्थ नबुझी कृत्रीम मूस्कान देख्दा नि
मूर्ख छिमेकी उकुस-मुकुस हुन थाल्यो ॥
झन् बास बस्न घर आंगन छोडि दिएं,
सांझ आएका पाहूना, जाशुस हुन थाल्यो ।
मैले आस्था बेची दिदा खुबै नाफा हुने भो !
आफ्ना मान्छेहरु बिच, खुस्खुस हुन थाल्यो ।
कुनै नेतासित नाता गांस्न गएकै हैन !
जन्ती त्यसै उत्तेजित, जुलुस हुन थाल्यो ।