Posted by: shirish January 4, 2007
A Sher A Day: Part II: Ghazal talk
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rahulvai I would get rid of the last sher- it does not sound great. I think there is no new perspective with that. Just my thought. and modify the first one. Plus the "radif" has gone bad.
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