Gautam jee Your ghazal is superb. Keep on going. gajjab cha ! Ek se Ek sher haru. Malai ta Nepali ghazal ko website banau ki justo lagyo ! Nepe, Thank You for your comments. I adore your knowledge of Ghazal and Poetry. You are attributable to this progression. I have a format for next sher. I will write on my way back home in the commuter rail. The choice of "Kaffia" and attempt to write every thing with words containing "two syllables" made it hard to express. Lets see. Virus Thank You for your intentions to take the thread on the top. Ali Jhelli bayena ra bhanya??