Posted by: shirish May 16, 2006
A Sher A Day: Part II: Ghazal talk
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I wrote this long time back in a very different way and Gorkhapatra published this as a ghazal. Then it did not have any form of ghazal so I decided to convert this into a ghazal. for New writers: word with red are QUAFIA and blue are the RADIF. योद्दाहरु स्वेच्छाले हार्न तैयार छन् । उन्ले बगाए बगि दिने किनार छन् । धर्साहरुले कोरेर कोर्नै नसकिने बा! बा! आकारका क्या प्रकार छन् । डुब्नलाई गहिराई खोज्दा उनले बचाउन राजी माझी हजार छन् । सपनामै पनि सिमित एकान्त०भेटेन पछ्याउदै आएका पाईला अपार छन् । सबैले देख्नेलाई भ्रम कसरि भन्नु? ईन्द्रणी भित्र झुल्किने मुहार छन् !
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