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 Ek chhoti si kahani ( True story )

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Posted on 01-31-13 4:44 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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There was a beautiful girl living next to my house about 150 Meter away. I always wanted to go close to her and introduce myself, but couldn't gather that much courage. She used to go college passing my house. I always waited to see her face hiding behind the wall of my house. It was like my daily routine. She was unaware of my activities.
Whenever I see her my day was made, I would be happiest guy in the world. Her innocent face with big eyes and white complexion had made me crazy. I don't know what was that: love, attraction, sexual attraction, crush whatever was that. It used to bring tremendous happiness within me.
My days was going like this suddenly one day I had an eye contact with her while she was passing by my home. I felt like she gave light smile, no wonder my limit of happiness. This gave me little more courage to go in front of her and confess whatever feeling I had towards her..................to be continued
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Posted on 02-17-13 9:36 PM     [Snapshot: 5316]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Seems like no one is interested anymore
 
Posted on 02-17-13 10:52 PM     [Snapshot: 5334]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I m glad u finally figured it out spiritual bro! Let us if u get lucky!
 
Posted on 02-17-13 10:57 PM     [Snapshot: 5334]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I sure would like to know how this ends spiritual bro. But i think telling your love story in instalments has caused people to lose interest. You write the whole story and post it so that people could read it all at once. :)


 
Posted on 02-18-13 11:21 AM     [Snapshot: 5467]     Reply [Subscribe]
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This is a soap opera lol.

 
Posted on 02-18-13 8:21 PM     [Snapshot: 5601]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 It's been 4 days since you last wrote. I'll sue you if you didn't continue. You can't leave us hanging like this. 
 
Posted on 02-20-13 6:54 PM     [Snapshot: 5789]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 if anybody wanna chit-chat with me, I am online in sajha chat
 
Posted on 02-20-13 7:35 PM     [Snapshot: 5845]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I take my "Grammar Nazi" comment back , Spiritual. Who needs grammar when it can be so exciting without proper use of it.

Please continue. I, for sure, am waiting to hear your story.

 
Posted on 02-22-13 3:03 PM     [Snapshot: 6150]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 BINGO!
      Feeling was unexplainable. It was like when you hit jackpot. It was like when you apply for visa and you are granted. Man it was just awesome awesome.
      She said "kina yettika time lagayeko ta"  Wwooo. I started flying up high in the sky. No boundary. No limit. No nothing. I felt myself like a lightest object in the world. So light that I can fly.
     My dream was changing into reality.  I wanted to touch her. I wanted to feel her. I wanted to kiss. I wanted to hug her. I wanted to play with her hair. I was so happy that she is mine now.
    I told her, "Ayushma I am so happy, you don't know how happy I am". She was laughing and was saying me too very happy.
I told her, "Let's meet somewhere tomorrow, it's saturday". She said "OK". But where? I told , "Let's meet around Manakamana hall in baneshwore and go for movie" She said "OK"
    We hanged up the call after that. I was so happy. I was smiling. I was excited with feeling that I will be meeting her in completely new
relationship. Girlfriend Boyfriend. The first girlfriend of my life. I was very very happy when my father had bought me new pulsar bike. But this feeling was way over than that.
   It was already 10:30, it was time to sleep. But there was  no any signal that sleep is coming soon. I was just turing left and right trying to sleep.
   I don't know when did I fall asleep. I woke up at 6:30 in the morning. I remembered the last night and got cheerful. It was one of the best morning of my life...... ..............
to be continued

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Posted on 02-22-13 3:09 PM     [Snapshot: 6156]     Reply [Subscribe]
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You are so lucky -

waiting for more. keep writing

 
Posted on 02-22-13 4:00 PM     [Snapshot: 6232]     Reply [Subscribe]
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after one week, he comes up with fking ten lines? myan u are killing us.
 
Posted on 02-24-13 1:00 PM     [Snapshot: 6464]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 Friends I am taking a week off, so letting you know in advance.
 
Posted on 02-24-13 7:28 PM     [Snapshot: 6574]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 This ain't cool. Not cool at all. 
 
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 I had always wished that I had someone who I could share everything. Someone who will love me unconditionally and vice-versa. I don't know if this was natural or not. I had this feeling since I was in 10th grade. I wanted companion to be with. I was extremely happy that it got fulfilled. Now I have Ayushma.
    Since the morning, my mood was super good. Perhaps, it was showing all over me. Tha'ts why my mom noticed, "k ho girlfriends pais ki k ho, khub khusi dekhinchha ta". I was shocked for a while, wondering if they knew about our relationship. But she was just teasing, but what a coincident?
   My first date with my Girlfriend. I had to look my best. Usually I wash off my head only. But I decided to take full body shower, so heated  water in the stove. Gas was expensive. Mattitel was cheaper at that time. I think it's still the same.
 After taking shower, I decided to put on the best cloth I have had at that time. I got ready with the best possible way I knew of. We were supposed to meet at 11:30 a.m. So I left home at 11:00 a.m. 
  I reached manakamana hall around 11:15 a.m. I looked around for Ayushma, she wasn't there. So I sat in one of the bakery cafe.
Started to think about how to talk to her. I was feeling little bit uneasy. My heart was pumping. ...........to be continued

 
Posted on 02-27-13 2:17 PM     [Snapshot: 6860]     Reply [Subscribe]
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good going spritual - but 12 lines ain't enough, we need more

 
Posted on 02-27-13 2:43 PM     [Snapshot: 6903]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Isn't this notion of "choti si kahani" getting just a little "Lumbi" by each passing day? :)
 
Posted on 02-27-13 5:31 PM     [Snapshot: 6955]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Maybe he is referring to our Nepali height. We are short by nature, that is why it is chotisi love story.
 
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 She came on her scooty with brightening smile on her face. She got the most beautiful smile in the world. Sometimes I used to think as if I am not suitable for her. I got off from my chair and  went towards her. She was like 10 mins late. When we both came face to face, we both say only Hi. I knew both of us were feeling shy because this was our first official date and both of us didn't know how to carry off the date.
 I asked her "Ayushma kina dhila ni", she said, "traffic jam ma pare tesaile ali dhila bhayo". I asked her, "Shall we go for movie?".
She said "OK".
  At that time, there was a hindi movie called "Bichhu"  running. Starcast was Bobby Deol and Rani Mukherjee. I wasn't caring much about the movie but caring more about having private time with her. We entered inside the cinema hall. Hall was almost empty. There were around only 100 audience scattered. Since I didn't wanted to be interferred by anybody else. I choose the corner sit. There were nobody infront and behind us. Film started. It was action movie. I wasn't paying any attention at all in the movie. I was just staying stiff and thinking of holding her hand.
  After sometime, I slowly moved my hand and placed my hand on the top of her hand. She was fine with that. She pretended as if she was watching movie. I know samething might have been going inside her as I was going through. Now I wanted to kiss her which was going to be first kiss of my life. I moved my head close towards her. She responded. She came close towards me. Then we started kissing like crazy...... to be continued.
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Posted on 03-04-13 1:21 PM     [Snapshot: 7241]     Reply [Subscribe]
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The film's title might as well have been "bichhumma". :)  Action movie mah alikati romance rakhi deko spiritual bro?. hehe
 
Posted on 01-28-14 11:44 PM     [Snapshot: 9134]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I wanted to write the climax of my story. Are my fans ready to hear or read it?
 
Posted on 01-29-14 9:19 AM     [Snapshot: 9240]     Reply [Subscribe]
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spritual: You waited almost a year to write the climax of your story?
 



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