Thank you nitisa, I am glad you liked it.

Poonte, I always appreciate genuine and honest comments. I am not content with this piece myself, and I feel like I could have added much more to the storyline. It was an attempt to write in Nepali (which I haven't done in years), and somehow it took away from the story as I tried to incorporate two languages. Thanks a bunch for your honest opinion though - I can't stress how much I appreciate it.