Posted by: freedom2012 February 12, 2013
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Nice read. I think you could write a novel in the future if you keep to it. You are expressive and quite articulate. A couple of corrections though.
1)There was someone at home actually, the mother.
2)Dimple did expose in Saagar.
1)There was someone at home actually, the mother.
2)Dimple did expose in Saagar.
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